1. Noticed how they spelled "Just" wrong (first line)

2. Some of us don't want Heely's! we don't want to put a plug where the wheel is supposed to be.

3. Some of us....well most... Enjoy SOap Shoes a lot better than Heely's....

My thought is this folks... If we all E-mail Journeys, and any other SOap Shoe retailer, Requesting that Soap Shoes be put back on the shelves....If they get enough E-mails they may think about contacting HSL! We could do HSL a big favor and keep SOap alive...I know that production will continue in the fall but lets make sure that it stays that way. Does anyone agree?

Don't be a dick. Using phrases like 'I think its in your best interests' and 'on behalf of the people that agree with me' make you soumd like you're 12. If you had any understanding of business practice then you'd have realised that your e-mail was enormously pathetic before you sent it.

How do you know 'most of us' enjoy Soap Shoes more? I'm sure that if 'most of us' didn't like Heelys then the market for them would collapse. You also don't mention who 'most of us' are; 'most of us' could be your friends at school, your family or the entire global population, couldn't it? You also bring up the fact that they said you could plug the hole where the wheel goes, but you made no mention of this feature in the e-mail, so how would they know that you either don't like that or don't know about it?

Whilst you went to great pains to point out a single spelling mistake, here are a few of yours that you missed somehow:
'Heely's' - The shoes are called 'Heelys'. Not 'Heely's'. If the shoes were just called 'Heely', the plural of this would be 'Heelies', not 'Heely's'.
'Its' - This is an abbreviation of 'it is', thus there is the need for an apostrophe between 'it' and 's'(you should be familiar with these as you frequently typed 'Heely's')
'which is in very similar in design' - too many 'in's. What were you thinking?
'except theres no wheels' - 'wheels' is plural. Overlooking the fact that you missed out the apostrophe in 'theres', 'there is no wheels' is wholly incorrect. You mean 'there are no wheels'; 'theres no wheels' is, at best, a colloquialism borne out of laziness and therefore has no place in a professional e-mail to a respected retail outlet.
'... like to ask: Since you ...' - You have used a colon in completely the wrong grammatcical context. Please learn how to use such punctuation marks before wildly sticking them into sentences because they look fun.
'buisiness' - I believe the word you're looking for is 'business'. That may well have been an innocent typo but, since you picked up on 'lust', which is as much a typo as 'buisiness', I felt you should know.

You also have made several capitalisation errors. Examples of this include:
'Those like me Seeking SOAP Shoes';
'Heely's Brand shoes';
'i would like to'.


In conclusion, learn to proof read what you type. Maybe then people will start to take you seriously.

wow Mart, have you got a GCSE in english at A* level or something?

And from the corporate view, I suppose it is not "crap". If I weren't so close to Soap shoes, I'd probably do the same thing (given I had the power to make such a decision or participate in doing so).

By the way, Are you in Honors of English class or sumthing? You pointed out every fucking mistake on my letter....So what?! I bet even you make mistakes to you fucktard. But i'll give you props....You would make a good English teacher

I think even though SOME people don't agree with me, I AM entitled to my opinions and trying to help out in SOap...I am not on the Team, but i will damn sure do my best to spread the fucking word of Soap and keep it alive

'i dun give a fuck what you say'

I'm entirely certain that your five posts of whiney teenage angst prove that you do 'give a fuck'.

And no, I don't have an A* or an Honours in English. Since when does somebody have to be a genius to have a very basic understanding of the English language?

I agree with the others on cooling down a tad. *is moderator on some other forums*

Hm.. I say, go for it man. I sure as hell want to get some Soaps easy without paying for shipping. Journey's is like, an hour drive or less. It's not that bad.

Seriously though dude, if you want to put forward a serious proposition like that, you're going to have to be a bit more persuasive and show the retailer why you don't want Heelys; for all he knows, you could be one of a number of kids who hold a 'soapz are kool, heely's r GAY LOLZORZ' point of view.

So yeah, if you want to make a serious difference to the expansion of the Soap brand, put a bit more time and effort into it, yeah? And for the record this is the only time I've 'bitched out' at you; told you you'd know about it if I did ;)

Mart's right in that you should definately proofread emails to companys or to people that you're trying to persuade, however he shouldn't have blown up on you like that.

Of course I see the point in helping the brand, it's just that almost all of the suggestions made so far have been worthless

I... think I've already mentioned that somewhere in this post :|